tisdag 2 oktober 2007

First draft - Try this 3.6

Write a paragraph of no more than a hundred words presenting a character through authorial interpretation. Cover at least five years in the character's life, four qualities he or she possesses, three important events and two habitual actions.

The scars of the endless number of fat camps never healed. The now thirty-something successful lawyer with the perfect outside drove across town to an all-hours candy store to stuff his new BMW full of the forbidden, like always on Thursdays. He took pleasure in knowing that he had them all fooled. He remembered the day that made him change, from the obvious to the secret. It was her and the way she looked at him. As usual, he turned his loaded car left instead of right just to make sure she was at home. But the lights were out.

4 kommentarer:

Fairy Cakes sa...

Hallå det här är spännande!
Skriv dina drafts i word istället så att du bara kan klippa in dem lite lätt här!!!! *bestämd röst*

Elin sa...

Hur menar du då? Jag kopierar ju dem från Word...

Anonym sa...

Hello darling! Du skrev i början av ditt inlägg "när jag pallrara att skriva av den.."

Anonym sa...

Var jag som skrev det där :-)