It´s clear that by "the monster" you mean yourself, and its scary yet fascinating, how you describe yourself almoust like somewhat really creepy from a S. King novell. I like yuor text but arent´t there a bit to many metaphores. If you were going for a rather metaphoric crammed text you really achieved that ;-) But otherwise it gets a bit distracting from the actual story. I´m sorry for my poor analysis, just ordered a book on litterature-reading I´m sure it wil help me on the way, and improve my ability to look att your creative writing more proffessional.
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It´s clear that by "the monster" you mean yourself, and its scary yet fascinating, how you describe yourself almoust like somewhat really creepy from a S. King novell. I like yuor text but arent´t there a bit to many metaphores. If you were going for a rather metaphoric crammed text you really achieved that ;-) But otherwise it gets a bit distracting from the actual story. I´m sorry for my poor analysis, just ordered a book on litterature-reading I´m sure it wil help me on the way, and improve my ability to look att your creative writing more proffessional.
Tackar för feedbacken! Det var en övning i metaforer också, hence the cramming! Puss!
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